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Sales
Letter Creator
Increase
Your Sales Instantly
By
Improving Your Sales Letter
Just follow
the simple instructions below, click the "Create" button at the bottom, and
view the results page.
Sub-Headline
Is Smaller And Goes Below Headline
Dear
Friend;
First
Paragraph
Intro
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Examples:
Women all over the world are shedding pounds easier than every
before, and it's all thanks to the revolutionary new diet device,
"Tapeworm Plus"! I'll explain how it works in a minute,
but picture this: You can eat as much as you want - whenever
you want - and still lose weight! |
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Sub-Headline (It's very important to break up paragraphs of your sales
letter with Sub-Headlines to keep your readers interested. Your sub-headlines
should stress main points so if your reader is "skimming" your
ad and only reads the Sub-Headlines, they can still tell what's going
on.
Paragraph:
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Examples:
I know what you're thinking: "Tapeworms are only for supermodels,
they're not for regular people like me!" -But you couldn't
be more wrong... In fact, your husband's mistress could even
be on the tapeworm diet right now and you'd never know. |
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Keep your sentences
short and your paragraphs short as well... And use Sub-Headlines every
couple of short paragraphs to keep things easy to ready
Paragraph:
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Don't get jealous - Get even! And it doesn't get any easier,
you just take ONE TAPEWORM - ONE TIME - And then forget about
it... The Tapeworm does the work so you don't have to! |
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Just
Imagine Being Able To:
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Example:
Finally eat the WHOLE CAKE and not feel guilty!
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Example:
Stop having to make yourself throw up after every meal
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Example:
Fit through a door without turning sideways
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Example:
Make
Laura Flynn Boyle look like a fat pig
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Example:
Show up at your High School reunion and have the Football Team no longer
embarrassed to have had sex with you...And that's
just for starters!
Paragraph:
Address Skepticism |
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| Examples:
Look, I know you've seen a lot of "pie in the sky"
weight loss schemes, but this is real... TAPEWORMS are real.
You can hold them in your hand. You can actually feel them working
in your stomach. And I'm betting you'll be calling YOUR Tapeworm
your best friend once you actually try it for yourself. |
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And not only
that, but:
Bullet1
Example:
Our special imported Amazon Tapeworms grow to be twice the size of normal
Tapeworms (That means twice the weight loss for you!)
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Example:
This exotic method of weight control has been around for centuries - That
means it's proven (don't fall for newfangled schemes)
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Example:
Thousands of people just like you ALREADY have Tapeworms - What are you
waiting for??
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Example:
We
guarantee you'll be completely overjoyed with the results or we'll refund
every penny!
Paragraph:
About Guarantee |
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| Examples:
I INSIST you try it out completely at my risk. Try it for 60
days and SEE your results for yourself. See your friends' amazed
reactions! If you're not 100% blown away by the results, just
return it for a full refund, no questions asked. But I'm betting
once you see the results you'll consider your Tapeworm your
new lifelong friend! (I named mine "Cecil".) |
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By responding
right now, you'll also get these valuable bonuses that'll kick your results
into overdrive:
Paragraph:
State price and Re-state guarantee |
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| Examples:
This is an amazing opportunity and there's NO WAY YOU CAN LOSE.
If your friends aren't accusing you of having had your stomach
stapled, if you don't eat like a horse and STILL look like a
million bucks, just return your Tapeworm in its original condition
and we'll buy it back from you - Case Closed. |
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Click
Here To Get It Now
Paragraph:
Assurance about results or delivery |
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| Examples:
Your Tapeworm will be rushed to you in a discrete plain package
by Fed Ex, and you can start shedding those unwanted pounds
within the next 2-3 days. And remember, it's 100% guaranteed. |
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P.S.
#1
Summary of your main selling point |
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| Examples:
P.S. - Thousands of people just like you are already benefitting
from my Tapeworm Plus System. Now it's your turn... You've got
nothing to lose! |
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P.S.
#2 Stress the temporary availability
or discount of offer |
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| Examples:
P.P.S. - You MUST respond now to lock in this special price
and all the valuable bonuses. Don't miss out and don't waste
another day without own Tapeworm. |
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OK, You're
All Set! Just Click The "Create Sales Letter" Button And Print
Out Your Results, Then Come Back To This Page To Try "Tweaking"
Your Claims And Ad Copy To Try And Improve Your Results Even More.
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